Tuesday, September 11, 2007

Life is My Window

Perfume pool,
life is my window sex,
porcelain girl of sky
old soft man of ghost.

Open to needle
red rhythm rot
eat bone
wear moist kiss,
celebrate the cut of candy;
almost free
but never -
fat eternity.


thisisme said...

The tenses you use, aside from being gramatically incorrect, stunt the flow of these verses.

ragingplanetfire said...

i know just messing around. the tempo is rough.

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