these words move round dropping deep into heart.These words sound sweet love is heard in a whisper.With every little vowel sound,every little breath of airtree's grow, smiles outshine the sun.
this filled my heart with sweetness...
umm... its "trees" because technically if you put a " ' " mark there its showing that it is the TREE's. There's a difference between saying "This is Mark's bicycle" and saying "The hammocks swung in the wind" you have to think whether it is the tree's (like an item ect.) or whether its trees as a group. :)example:"That is the tree's fruit"and"Those trees are very beautiful"hahahaha I'm jk with you, you know that... :P but I did like this one...the last line had alot of feeling to it. Nice.
Very nice sound you got going there dude, one thing though is that it should be "hearts" not "heart." But, other then that, good going.
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